Posted by: kashkin | February 5, 2009

The Snow Poem

Red & White
no human in sight,
on these deserted streets
nature in its might
as flee the birds of flight
Roam I upon these streets
like a kite, like a night
Not a doubt, in the slight
Nature is might and right
me and the snowman
amused in each others’ plight
as the cold begins to bite
so much for the concept of art!

kashkin


Responses

  1. Very intelligent wordplay ! :)

  2. It’s a nice, sweet poem! :)

    I can well imagine the deserted streets in snow. Stay safe!

  3. I can’t believe this is kashkin’s! :P

    Beautiful for a change! :)

    me and the snow man
    amused in each others’ plight

    Loved the lines ..
    Keep appearing! :)

  4. I can’t believe this is kashkin’s! :P

    Beautiful RHYMING for a change! :)

    me and the snow man
    amused in each others’ plight

    Loved the lines ..
    Keep appearing! :)

  5. hahahahaha Kashkin Bhai tell me honestly are you not missing ‘tandoor’ back in the village
    :-P ;-)

    By the way I was also surprised like AAdil when was reading this poem :-)

    Very sweet poem!!!! :-D

  6. I cant believe BMK hasnt commented on the snowman in here – :P

  7. @ Cav
    thanks for your comments

    @ Ayesha
    The streets were well deserted in London during that time. It reminded me of those scenes from the old klassics from Dickens to Hardy.

    @Aadil
    I think the only time i introduce a bit of rhyme in my poems is when I write a humorous poem…..but shukria for all your comments

    @Nayni

    Jee sarkar i am missing the old tandoor back in the village….thanks for liking the poem…instead of tandoor the only option i had was to create a half baked snow man…

    @ Asma
    Thanks and I am sure BMK will turn up as well once his travels from Peshawar to Lahore come to end.


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