Red & White
no human in sight,
on these deserted streets
nature in its might
as flee the birds of flight
Roam I upon these streets
like a kite, like a night
Not a doubt, in the slight
Nature is might and right
me and the snowman
amused in each others’ plight
as the cold begins to bite
so much for the concept of art!
kashkin
Very intelligent wordplay !
By: Cavaliere on February 5, 2009
at 1:07 pm
It’s a nice, sweet poem!
I can well imagine the deserted streets in snow. Stay safe!
By: Ayesha on February 5, 2009
at 1:19 pm
I can’t believe this is kashkin’s!
Beautiful for a change!
me and the snow man
amused in each others’ plight
Loved the lines ..
Keep appearing!
By: Aadil on February 5, 2009
at 1:43 pm
I can’t believe this is kashkin’s!
Beautiful RHYMING for a change!
me and the snow man
amused in each others’ plight
Loved the lines ..
Keep appearing!
By: Aadil on February 5, 2009
at 1:43 pm
hahahahaha Kashkin Bhai tell me honestly are you not missing ‘tandoor’ back in the village
By the way I was also surprised like AAdil when was reading this poem
Very sweet poem!!!!
By: Nayni on February 7, 2009
at 8:00 am
I cant believe BMK hasnt commented on the snowman in here –
By: Asma Ahsan on February 8, 2009
at 12:33 am
@ Cav
thanks for your comments
@ Ayesha
The streets were well deserted in London during that time. It reminded me of those scenes from the old klassics from Dickens to Hardy.
@Aadil
I think the only time i introduce a bit of rhyme in my poems is when I write a humorous poem…..but shukria for all your comments
@Nayni
Jee sarkar i am missing the old tandoor back in the village….thanks for liking the poem…instead of tandoor the only option i had was to create a half baked snow man…
@ Asma
Thanks and I am sure BMK will turn up as well once his travels from Peshawar to Lahore come to end.
By: kashkin on February 10, 2009
at 10:58 am